How?
The animation is adequate the story is non-existant and while the character art is slightly more impressive it isn't very well developed.
Perhaps in future you could add colour, more detail and incorporate a plot.
How?
The animation is adequate the story is non-existant and while the character art is slightly more impressive it isn't very well developed.
Perhaps in future you could add colour, more detail and incorporate a plot.
Kick impossible to the curve
Yeah...
For some reason this made me make a mess on the floor.. not a good one either.
Do you have a little sand in your vagina?
Good work is lost for lack of a little more...
Animation and plot is interesting and your style of art seems to compliment the animation however it is a shame that such an excellent piece of work is plagued by numerous spelling errors.
Apart from that well done!
oh >< so many people have said that. skrew it i'm spell checking next time!! :D thanks for the review
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Joined on 5/5/09